I sent the rough draft on to Jerry last week. He read it and, to my surprise, had a very MINIMAL amount of notes for things he would change. That was a relief because, even though I was proud of the script, you never know what others will think. Since he is the one offering to direct, I was very happy to see those results.
I made the corrections he suggested and sent it back to him. Next steps: he works on the shooting script; we work on raising funds; AND we work on casting!